bois_inside ([info]bois_inside) wrote,
@ 2005-04-14 01:58:00
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My best piece ever!
Well...in my opinion.

Posting this here, cuz I thought it just a tad too erotic for Birls...but I wanted to share...let me know what you think!
Wish I could submit it to OnOurBacks, but it isn't long enough. I sooo wish I could write for them though.


"Communion"
By: Abby Waller 2005

Dipping the tips of your fingers in liquid chocolate, your eyes stare into mine.
As I bring your fingers to my mouth and part my lips for their entry, you slowly shut them.
Milk chocolate and the taste of your flesh hit my tongue.
I roll your fingers in my mouth and taunt you with a hard swallow.
And like some seductive vamp you moan as if I'm sucking your rigid cock.
I lay you down and bring my cunt to your face, you try to receive me but I only pull away.
This time, your lips unmoving, I lower my heat onto your mouth.
I drag myself across your lips, and down to your chin.
Your tongue slides across your lips to taste away what I left behind.
I hover my sodden folds just over your nose...mere inches, bidding you to breathe me in.
And when you do, you grab my ass and pull me into your mouth.
You fuck away at my insides with a greedy, unrelenting tongue.
Your tremulous moans causing short sudden after shocks in my clit.
You pull me off of you and throw me onto my back;
As your teeth are sinking into the soft flesh of my neck as you fill me, swollen and ready, with your fingers.
And as you violate my every crease with hard, pounding thrusts…
I retaliate by digging my nails into your taut shoulders.
I move a single finger between your thighs, the discovery of saturation takes me over.
I slip my middle finger into you and you close your eyes, your jaw tightening...accepting me.
You moving into me, and I into you...your body meets mine.
Our mouths conjure a whole new utopia as we achingly kiss one another.
I look up you with small, searching, meek eyes;
And you stare back, with your own, pacifying and tender.
Our bodies were carved to fit into each other in this moment…
And I take you as you take all of me.




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[info]black_hawk85
2005-04-14 06:51 am UTC (link)
DAM YOU! now have to masturbate. I'm so tired.

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[info]bois_inside
2005-04-14 07:18 pm UTC (link)
hahaha...my apologies.

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[info]beingoflight
2005-04-14 06:22 pm UTC (link)
fuck. me. wow.

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[info]bois_inside
2005-04-14 07:18 pm UTC (link)
why thank you.

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[info]mshedwig
2005-04-14 06:50 pm UTC (link)
*ooororrgazzzzzm noise* that was AMAZING. wow. Write a book!

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[info]bois_inside
2005-04-14 07:17 pm UTC (link)
guess you liked it, lol. Getting published is the hard part ;) I could write many books.

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yum.
[info]morgue_ann
2005-04-18 08:01 am UTC (link)
you're incredible, keep it up kid.

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[info]vividxdreams
2005-05-01 10:03 pm UTC (link)
Wow..I need a cold shower now. Thank you very much. ;) lol.

Oh..Btw, I am SwtxRebelxGrrl, you posted on my journal before. I was reading around on your journal, and you are one kick ass chick. Add me?

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[info]bois_inside
2005-05-03 08:22 am UTC (link)
certainly, thanks for the compliment.
added.

*muah*

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